DJ-Chilvan's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[~Waking Fantasy~ (Remastered)]

chords

Your chords are too touching (especially your third set in the four used). I love everything about this song. 10/10. 5/5. and a DL. This song is very wonderful. Im serious, you have taken my breath away.
BTW, my song 'Terracrypha' is now remastered without distortion. Since you already reviewed it maybe you could vote for it this time.
GOOD JOB

Isoken responds:

Thanks so much for your review!

I checked out your song once again and it's amazing! Please add a value of 2 to my review, and 5/5!!

[The Pennsylvania DMV]

you tell 'em!

damn bitches, can never pass nobody. They failed my brother 2 days ago and he's goin back there right now to apply for another test. Stupid DMV bitches can suck my ballz too.

DJDustyGorilla responds:

Hell yeah!

[Icarus - Freedom Cry]

Beautiful

very touching, great quality. You should sell this. You have much talent fo what u do. good luck.

sorohanro responds:

Thanx.
I'll put a version for sale as well ;) just in a slightly different mix.

[BattleMode-MPL 2]

off da hizzy

5/5, 10/10, and a DL. You really did well on this. I love the bass line and the kicks the most.

Mister-Monker responds:

thanks ^_^ one of my favorites ill say

[Zeviron - Star Gazer]

not much remains

Its good as it is, yes it does need mastering and EQ. Also, that piano at the end should be an introduction to a part 2. (part 2 should be more piano DnB like). Also, your beat could use a little bit more "oomph." As in, make it a lil more complex. And the kick, its nice but there are better ones out there that could match this song a lil better. And lastly. the melody is ok! Maybe u could add a few harmonics to it so its slight repetitiveness could be overshadowed by harmony without changing the structure of the song. But overall, you really tried!
I hope this helped. We all need critique, especially me.

Zeviron responds:

Hey, thanks for the review.
I really like your part 2 idea...I've already done one of those, which was when I first started producing so it wasn't al that great.
Harmony is something that i'v never really thought about putting in to a song, and if i ever have it was accidental XD
But you've got some pretty good ideas that i will take into consideration, so yeah.

Well thanks for your criticism and once again for your review

['09 Orchestration Contest]

blows my own out of the water

i know y u dont wanna submit this but i advise u do. You have displayed much talent in this one. The most innovative so far.

EvilRaccoon responds:

Thanks DJ. (ive PM'ed you) Thanks for the score!

[_Theme Orchestration 2009]

Quality over Quantity

Upon the song is too short its very sweet. Try making an extended version and maybe we could collab in it. Right now I am making my own entry. The title is Distant Land. Keep on a look out for it.

vanguard182 responds:

hey checked out your entry, it's impressive. i'm probably not going to extend this as it was only for the contest and it's not really my style, but if i do i'll let you know. maybe we can collab some other time amigo

[Fancy Mike - Deathproof]

Nice

This beat is nice, IMO the crackling sound in the bkgrnd is nice. The only criticism i have here is that this beat could use a few more tracks.
Check out my beats.

Scribbler responds:

I agree with you. It's a bit too simple... That's why I need reviewers like you. Excellent feedback. Give me MOAR! :)

[Pokemon Battle 16-bit]

wow

this is really great. I like the soprano sax. What program did you use?

Check out some of my stuff.

Joshamuffin responds:

i used swiftlet midi editor and changes the instruments on a pokemon midi

i took the bass part out, then recorded the brass section and the soprano sax

then i took the bass only(it was pretty high for the slap bass) and i made it lower pitched in audacity

then i combined them in audacity